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reality is a soap bubble by ~noirMuse:iconnoirMuse:



reality is a soap bubble.

as I walk in viscid darkness I see nothing but one twisting path laying before me, illuminated.
knowing nothing for sure but that I have to walk this path, I walk.
not knowing what might surround me -completely covered in darkness - I never pause to wonder, all I let my eyes see is the mysterious flare the ground below my feet emits.

abruptly all the light vanishes. I feel like I'm in a soap bubble that is bursting.
Horror clasps its fingers around my neck  and I choke as I discover I'm left alone in a world I never knew.
©2007-2010 ~noirMuse
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Author's Comments

Considering that it took me less than an hour to write this and that it came out of nothing, I think it's more of a scrap than a deviation - but nobody ever pays attention to scraps, hm?
It's the first thing I wrote in ages so I'd appreciate comments of any kind.

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komisch, ich versuche auch in letzter zeit immer schon mal, wieder was zu schreiben. aber irgendwie fallen mir die richtigen worte immer nur dann ein, wenn ich sie grade nicht zu papier bringen kann.
hört sich nicht besonders positiv an, dein text. aber warum sollte er auch, wir sind ja alle nicht wirklich zufrieden damit, wie unser leben verläuft...
ich bin übrigens wirklich krank geworden. aber wohl kaum durch dich, das wäre wohl nicht so schnell gegangen.

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"Whenever people agree with me I always feel I must be wrong." Oscar Wilde
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Nadann gute Besserung den Damen.

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"I love Jesse Hughes!"
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danke <3

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Life is a fairytale.

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September 8, 2007
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